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Mar 2, 2012, 7:08:38 PM
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Critique by ~forgetyourwoes Mar 2, 2012, 11:01:01 AM
I must say that this is stuning! I would have to say that just about everything is right about this picture! The center of focus is the tree becuase it breaks the two horizon lines. The first one is the darker line where the tree sits, and the second is the hazy light purple in the back. From there, my eye goes to horizon line two and up to the pink clouds, where they go back to the purple. I'm not sure how it looks on your camera and screen, but on the screen that I am looking at this photograph on, the bottom looks like a super dark purple. After I looked at this for a while, I relized that, even though the movement on this picture is really good, I noticed that my eye liked to hang out at the bottom dark purple. I took a folder and covered up about the bottom half of the dark purple made the rest of the piece stand out more and better. Chaces are, the picture would benifit from cropping the bottom.
Overall, this is a super strong work. I hope you keep up the good work!

What I didn't like:
My eye stuck to the bottom

What I liked:
the movement
The moment that you caputred (overall)

I hope to see more of your work later on! Good job!
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Critique by =luckydesigns Mar 2, 2012, 10:51:54 AM
One of the first things I noticed about this photo was how it makes the viewer feel very peaceful, and calm. I think the atmosphere is one of things that attracts your attention immediately and brings back old memories, if that makes any sense.

The landscape is just generally beautiful, what with the sky and the mountains in the background - not to mention the fog. The clouds add an interesting pattern and I like how the orange/red colors contrast with the rest of the photo.

I feel as though the fog really adds to the photo, too. It makes me feel like something happened here, something mysterious and whatnot. To me, that kind of wonder and curiosity makes a photo unique. :nod:

The only suggesting I have is that perhaps you could increase the brightness a tad. The photo feels a little dark overall and I feel like that results in a loss of detail. :shrug:

Good work! :clap:
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~vewolff Apr 28, 2012   Photographer
Your photo got featured: favorites of april '12. Please fav this article so that more people can see it and your photo :heart:
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