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February 5, 2012
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Canon
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
1/395 second
F/5.6
100 mm
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Jan 28, 2012, 10:10:55 AM
Adobe Photoshop CS4 Macintosh
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:iconmaryfairie:
~maryfairie Mar 2, 2012   Photographer
So beautiful
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:iconindojo:
you are right, the sticks shouldn`t be there
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:icontalimeti:
Nice, but if youi need critique, there`s two sticks on the right side, which might be bothering, and I maybe would cut a bit from the left - for symmetry.
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:iconshotbyasavage:
~ShotByASavage Feb 5, 2012  Professional Photographer
What I like about this image is the simplicity. I think you are trying to express "stillness" if this is true you might try to level the horizon. Right now the horizon line being tilted down on the left gives the image more motion than I think you indented. But it that is my only "criticism" you did a great job. I especially like that you have the sky a bit more gray. most people would make that stark white . I like the choice it sets a slightly "darker" tone than simple stillness.
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:iconindojo:
thanks for your detailed reception and thoughts. this one has a lot
of symbolic for me.
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